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So here are eight sentences from my current WIP, A BIRD'S EYE VIEW. This is an excerpt from The Lore of Legends, an ancient collection of myths passed down from Keeper to Keeper. It is an oral tradition, there is no written record of any part of the Lore (until now, wink). Sahlaana is The Creator and Taijala is her daughter, Guardian of the Spirit.
One day the earth trembled with a mighty roaring from the beach.
A bear swam out of the sea and stood bellowing on the shore.
The people were afraid, the bear was fierce.
The gods were afraid, where had he come from?
Taijala, Sahlaana’s only daughter, decided to speak with the bear.
The bear was sad and angry because he had lost his mate, and he’d swum for many fathoms across the Endless Sea looking for her.
Taijala wanted to comfort the bear and lay with him.
Much appeased, the bear returned to his search.
ON FEB.25 I WAS AWARDED THE FOLLOWING SONG, WRITTEN AND PERFORMED BY BASAN, INSPIRED BY THIS EXCERPT (teehee!):
So here are eight sentences from my current WIP, A BIRD'S EYE VIEW. This is an excerpt from The Lore of Legends, an ancient collection of myths passed down from Keeper to Keeper. It is an oral tradition, there is no written record of any part of the Lore (until now, wink). Sahlaana is The Creator and Taijala is her daughter, Guardian of the Spirit.
One day the earth trembled with a mighty roaring from the beach.
A bear swam out of the sea and stood bellowing on the shore.
The people were afraid, the bear was fierce.
The gods were afraid, where had he come from?
Taijala, Sahlaana’s only daughter, decided to speak with the bear.
The bear was sad and angry because he had lost his mate, and he’d swum for many fathoms across the Endless Sea looking for her.
Taijala wanted to comfort the bear and lay with him.
Much appeased, the bear returned to his search.
ON FEB.25 I WAS AWARDED THE FOLLOWING SONG, WRITTEN AND PERFORMED BY BASAN, INSPIRED BY THIS EXCERPT (teehee!):
This event triggered a rebellion among the gods, which resulted in the sundering of the land into the many islands that make up the setting of my story.
So fun! Please join, I'd love to read your work.
And don't forget to read more great excerpts by the other participating WeWriWarriors!
So fun! Please join, I'd love to read your work.
And don't forget to read more great excerpts by the other participating WeWriWarriors!
I like that, very poetic and it drew me in!
ReplyDeleteAww, thanks Gemma, that's exactly what I needed to hear! Loved your 8, have (*blush*) been in that walked-in-on situation, SO mortifying, for all parties! Made me cringe and laugh.
DeleteOK wow, that definitely has the ring of a tribal folktale, wasn't expecting the ending (which of course could set up all kinds of interesting further events). Well done excerpt!
ReplyDelete:D Thanks Veronica! Tribal folktale is exactly what it is, I'm so glad that came across (and trust me, 'all kinds of interesting events' do indeed ensue. Thanks for reading!
DeleteAs I commented on your 8: I really liked the way you gave Nick a moment of uncertainty, so refreshing.
Very neat 8! What tribe is this handed down through? Love it!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sara! This tale isn't handed down through any tribe that I know of, though I wouldn't be surprised if there are similar legends in Native lore, the bear is a powerful figure in many of the old stories.
DeleteI like the way that this reads like folklore or an old tale–the style is very similar to passages of the bible, for example. And interesting tale, I wonder how the "current" people interpret the tale?
ReplyDeleteThanks Clare, that is exactly the feel I wanted to convey as this is an ancient story. Most of the "current" people don't know these old stories and those that do think they are nothing more than fairy tales. I can't wait to burst their bubbles! Thanks for reading and commenting.
DeleteDefinitely want to know more! Love legends and lure! Great 8! :D
ReplyDeleteThanks Karen! This is just a tiny snippet of the Lore that my poor protagonist has to memorize. I'll be happy to add more next weekend! Thanks for reading and commenting.
DeleteA nice legend.
ReplyDeleteThank you Elaine!
DeleteI like everything about this; the setting, the narrative and the repetitive simplicity of language. Smitten!
ReplyDeleteWow, Dana, thank you! You've totally made my day. :)
DeleteVery well done. I love the creation myths and this one's nicely told in what, to me, sounds like authentic "myth language."
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Virginia! I'm giddy...:D
DeleteI like creation myths, too---they say so much about the culture!
ReplyDeleteAnd they're a blast to write! Thanks for reading and commenting Sarah.
DeleteThat's quite good. Wondering what will be the outcome/consequences/results of that last bit. Could get very interesting.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kate. There are definitely some dire consequences as a result of that last bit!
DeleteI love oral traditions. Interesting snippet!
ReplyDeleteThank you Marie!
DeleteReally, really interesting. Great snippet. I can't wait to see where this is going.
ReplyDeleteYay, thanks A.S.! I can't wait to put up more next week. Thanks for reading and commenting!
DeleteWhat a great idea, and great excerpt :) really paints a wonderful and colourful world
ReplyDeleteThanks sjp! It's fascinating to me that you (and a couple of other commentors) mention the world-building...I have used so little description! It's a great exercise in "less is more" setting development... Thank you so much for reading and commenting. :)
DeleteHey, I loved this snippet too! I have to say, I was wondering if it was the Biblical 'lay with...' figure of speech at the end. *boggles.* Is that just me?
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing with us.
Lol, it's not just you, I meant she 'lay with him' in the Biblical sense...and all kinds of drama ensues! Thanks for dropping by and reading, and especially for your kind comments. :)
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